Monday 23 December 2019

Summer Learning Journey

Please write a short story. The story can be about anything that you wish!
On your blog, share your short story. We can’t wait to read it!
Long Long ago there lived a dog a very fluffy dog she was called Spark. She loved the water as long as her friend was there with her. Her best friend was called Rosa she loved playing with Rosa but one day Rosa said she was going to move away to Pine Lake that was 10 hours away from  Glistening Rocks where Spark lived. Spark was very sad. She thought she would be the happiest Dog in the world. But she was The saddest Dog in the world. But then the next day at School there was new dog coming to school with rosa gone  Spark was finally Excited  that someone else was coming to school. The next day the dog came to school her name was Biscuit. Spark saw the new dog  she went over to her after her playing and sitting with her they became best friends Spark and Biscuit Were so happy. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Pippa,

    Leisha here again :)

    What a great short story you have written. How did you come up with the idea to write about a dog named Spark? The places Pine Lake and Glistening Rocks sound like great places. I wish I knew what they looked like. Perhaps if you have time, you could draw a picture of some of these places, or of Spark, Rosa and Biscuit? Adding pictures and colour can make your posts even more eye-catching and interesting for the reader.

    Leisha
    :)

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