Wednesday, 18 December 2019

Summer Learning Journey

For this activity, let’s imagine that you were Neil Armstrong.  On your blog, write a short poem describing how you felt when you first set foot on the moon.



Surprised
Peaceful
Amazed
Calm
Enjoyable

2 comments:

  1. Hi Pippa!

    Thank you for sharing your poem! It’s great that you have focused it around different emotions that you would feel when on the moon. Would you like to go to the moon? What would you like to do when you get older?

    Next time you could try adding to your poem so that you have more detail. You could perhaps try creating a haiku poem!


    Here is a great resource for poem writing:

    https://www.google.com/url?q=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.poetry4kids.com%2Flessons%2Fpoetry-writing-lessons%2F&sa=D&sntz=1&usg=AFQjCNEnd9ZtEbSormeNq10mnIOq270-tw

    Keep up the great work!

    Gabe

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  2. Hi Gabe, I would like to be a veterinarian when I am older.
    I don't think I would like to go to the moon. Neil Armstrong would.

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.