Monday, 23 December 2019

Summer Learning Journey


Please write a letter to Jacinda about something that is important to you. Tell her why it is important and what you would like her to do about it.

Dear Jacinda, I hate the way some people treat  animals everybody should be nice to them. If they are not they should go to prison. Please stop people from hurting those special animals.
Don't you want the animals to be happy?. I know I do

Yours Sincerely Pippa 
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 December 2019 at 16:09

    Kia Ora Pippa,
    This is great work but instead you could use some more descriptive language because you put "be nice to them" but instead you could say
    "Treat them kinder" .
    Great work and well done.
    Summer

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  2. Anonymous27 December 2019 at 10:45

    Hi Summer, thank you giving me ideas what I could have done.
    Great work.

    Pippa

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  3. Leisha SLJ9 January 2020 at 10:17

    Hello Pippa,

    I can tell you have so much love for animals. That is a really wonderful thing. The world needs more people like you :). I like that you have chosen this topic as I know it is an issue that is very important to you. What could be some ways that Jacinda could help teach people to treat animals in kinder ways?

    Leisha
    :)

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